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Another Pantless Morning.

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spit just woke up and is enjoying her moring pantless :D i really like how this came out with no ref. i drew it in 3 hour a few days ago and it took me 3 days to finish didgetly! love this so much.
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Okay. First off I would like to say nice job. I like the concept of this. But the shading on the hair still seems to be a bit globed.. Use smaller/stringier lines when your shading your hair. The fur pattern on your tail looks to be going in all different directions, make sure that you keep the fur flowing. The body is alright but your mid section looks a bit to long; and the head is a bit to large. Your snout/muzzle shouldn't be as skinny as you have it. and back to the hair; the way you have it going down her neck; I see what your getting at here, but it looks to stiff. Your going for the flowing down kinda look so, add more detail. The background : It's very nice, I like your choice of colors, but the sun shouldn't be so blurred. Try making it a solid circle then a tiny bit of blur, along with an over lay color and much more blur to make that bright glowing affect. I really like the bed, it had nice detail and fairly nice shading.

You have been improving a lot since these years have gone by, I can't wait to see more of your art(=